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In the 21century, we can communicate in different ways. People on the one hand read a traditional letter on the other hand modern e -mails. However,which with them is better? In my opinion on e-mails is the that we can send and receive messages at a time which suits you. If I want read a message to my friend late at night I will do it. On the contrary to a letter for instance If I wrote a letter at night , I can not sent it right away because post office are closed at this time.The main advantage is that do not have to worry about formal style.In e-mails write everything on the keyboard and special programme improve errors which make.As a result can write a message without errors.E-mails write faster than letters.However, while forget haw we should write a letter and a formal style.Another advantage is that,know immediately what it is abot from the 'subject' box.People can know immediately how is subject e - mails.On the contrary,the written letter.However, e -mails ,have also bad side for instance not everyone checks their our message regularly so they may miss an important news.We can result than have a trouble.On the contrary letters.Next negative side our'beloved' e - mails is fact, that nobody cares about correct spelling or punctuation.Effect this is for example doing many errors and forgetting about good writing a words.If I write a letters , I will learn to write words without errors.What is more e - mails are not usually worth saving whereas you can keep letters and look at them later.Letters are a great memorial for the future.Meanwhile e - mails remove with our computer.On balance,I would say that from time to time worth write a letter.We people 21century don't forget the traditional letter.
Nowadays, in the 21st century...On the one hand, people still read traditional letters on the other hand e-mails are becoming more popular
However w 3 linii można by pominąć jakoś nie brzmi to poprzedniej treści
Which of them is better?
In my opinion [bez on], e-mails are [albo e-mail is]
at the time which suits you
If I want read ???[send?] a message to my.
on the contrary (fajny zwrot swoją drogą) raczej bez 'to' tylko przecinek I treść
'On the contrary, the letter which I write late at night cannot be send immediately because post office is open only at particular time.'
The main advantage is that [you/we/the one/people] do not have to
Writing e-mails you can/may use programs to check spelling/grammar //correct errors (not improve (ulepszać błędy?)
As a result (who?) can write
E-mails are written faster than letters. (passive voice)
Haw? you ment dog's barking? ^^
Później przejrze reszte, albo niech ktoś inny pomoże.
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Zmieniony przez - Swamprage w dniu 2010-03-29 18:10:25
Another advantage is that we/you/receiver know immediately what it is abo u t from the 'subject' box. However, e -mails ,have also zamiast bad siDe: disadvantage/con/drawback for instance not everyone checks their our -po co to our? message raczej inbox regularly so they may miss an important news. Next negative side of our'beloved' e - mails is fact, that nobody cares about correct spelling or punctuation. The effect of this is for example doing many errors and forgetting about good writing a words use just 'grammar' . If I write a letters , I will learn to write words without errors. What is more, mails are not usually worth saving whereas you can keep letters and look at them later. Letter can be great keepsake while e-mail is often deleted without trace. On balance, I would say that from time to time it is worth to write a letter. We people of 21century don't forget the traditional letter.
Ta część jest kompletnie bez sensu:
People can know immediately how is subject e - mails. On the contrary,the written letter.
We can result than have a trouble.On the contrary letters. to też
Błędów jest więcej ale pokazałem takie bardziej 'podstawowe' jak brak zaimków i przyimków itd
Czesc bledow w składni wynika z przekładania polskiej konstrukcji zdania bezp. na angielski a to często pułapka bo wychodzi bzdurka
Niech jeszcze jakis spec to przejrzy, sam też mogłem coś pokręcić bo zmęczony, nie zwróciłem uwagi na ogólna kompozycję bo jeśli ma to być essey/rozprawka itd to powinien być wstęp dalej podpunkty z wadami/zaletami etc i na koniec podsumowanie zakończenie...
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