Proszę o poprawienie tego oto listu, w razie niezrozumienia, piszcie, co przetłumaczyć. Treść nie musi byc słowo w słowo taka sama, jeśli mielibyście ochotę coś "wyrzucić", po prostu skasujcie, chcę aby tekst był spójny i logiczny.
Dear Eve,
I'm sorry I haven't written for so long. I hope You're well.
You know, I have had a meeting connected with method of nutrition. It has been on 2nd October and taken place on my school. The woman who chaired this discussion talk us that we should reduce calories and cut down on sweets, cakes and chocolate. I ought to follow a sensible diet- eat as much low-fat food as possible. Probably I'll begin to lose weight. I must keep fit and stay in the shape- why do I work out in the gym or go jogging? It's very important for our health. I shouldn't get irritated- I ought to keep calm and avoid stress at home and school. I knew the eating between meals is the fastest way to put on weight. I need to stay in shape but I must remember to keep a balanced lifestyle.
Have a care!
I'm sorry I haven't written for so long. I hope you're well.
You know, I had a meeting regarding various methods of nutrition. It was held on the 2nd of October in my school. The woman who carried the discussion told us that we should reduce calories and cut down on sweets, cakes and chocolate. I found out that I should follow a sensible diet. If I eat as much low-fat food as possible I'll probably begin to lose weight. I realized that it is important to be fit and stay in shape. I was told that working out in a gym or going jogging is very important for our health. I also found out that I shouldn't get irritated, that I should stay calm and avoid stress at home and school. I learned that eating between meals is the fastest way to put on weight. I became aware that I need to stay in shape but I must remember to keep a balanced lifestyle.
Taka care!
XYZ
aha. no i jesli piszesz I need to stay in shape but I must remember to keep a balanced lifestyle.
to znaczylo by mniej wiecej tyle, ze wiesz, ze musisz byc w formie ale nie mozesz zapomniec o uciechac zywota. ;]
Zmieniony przez - Grezegor w dniu 2007-11-21 18:41:58
Taka care!, oczywiście Take - pomyślałem że może lepiej poprawić
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aha no i w zdaniu If I eat as much low-fat food as possible I'll probably begin to lose weight.
powinno byc loose Grezegor co ty piszesz? powinno być lose tak jak napisałeś za pierwszym razem
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