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zetsu
 Wysłana - 17 maj 2014 16:15        | zgłoś naruszenie regulaminu

Sprawdź ile procent masz tłuszczu

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I am writing to express my interest in a summer internship with xxx Company. Currently I am in the middle of my second year at the xx University. My major is xx and I am sure that my academic background, combined with my personal experience, could be beneficial to your work environment.

I have been working for xx as a xx for two years now. I have learned a lot about the company and I am confident that it is the best possible place to further my skills in Human Resources area. As a xx worker, I have always been known as a very creative person with great interpersonal skills and I would really like to use this experience in original and innovative ways. In addition, from being involved with many additional groups during work and high school and maintaining high grades at the same time, I am positive that I can handle multiple responsibilities and successfully meet deadlines.

I would welcome the opportunity to discuss my qualifications for a spring internship at your Human Resources and communication branch. I am extremely enthusiastic about the idea of becoming an intern in xx Company. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely,

 
MrMojo
 Wysłana - 17 maj 2014 18:44      [zgłoszenie naruszenia]

As a xx worker, I have always been known as a very creative person with great interpersonal skills and I would really like to use this experience in original and innovative ways.

What experience? Piszesz o umiejętnościach, a później o doświadczeniu. Może "use (work) experience gained in xxx".


In addition, from being involved with many additional groups during work and high school and maintaining high grades at the same time, I am positive that I can handle multiple responsibilities and successfully meet deadlines.

Nie wiem czy "additional groups" jest dostatecznie jasne. Zmieniłbym "from" na 'because' albo 'since' - 'because I have been'.

Możliwe, że zdanie jest poprawne, tylko mi jakoś nie leży.
'during work' brzmi jak w godzinach pracy.

additional activities beside work and school (?)

Zmieniony przez - MrMojo w dniu 2014-05-17 18:46:31
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deerhunter
 Wysłana - 17 maj 2014 20:15      [zgłoszenie naruszenia]

have always been known as a very creative person with great interpersonal skills and I would really like to use this experience in original and innovative ways

 
deerhunter
 Wysłana - 17 maj 2014 20:16      [zgłoszenie naruszenia]

po mojemu:
have always been known as a - i proved myself as a
I would really like to i would gladly

przepraszam wszystkich za duplikat.

Zmieniony przez - deerhunter w dniu 2014-05-17 20:16:56

 
zetsu
 Wysłana - 17 maj 2014 20:21      [zgłoszenie naruszenia]

dzieki panowie, sogi leca. jak bede miec chwile czasu to postaram sie uwzglednic wasze propozycje i wkleje do ostatecznej oceny

 
deerhunter
 Wysłana - 19 maj 2014 00:04       [zgłoszenie naruszenia]

jescze zauważyłem, że na poczatku piszesz o summer internship, a na końcu o spring internship.

[Powiadom mnie, jeśli ktoś odpowie na ten artykuł.]



 
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